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Philip Ridgers's avatar

Great critique, Clay! The story's clearly shaping up nicely. I hope you enjoy the revision process, Tamara. I'll be interested to hear about where it goes next. And all the best with writing your short story, Clay. I'm looking forward to hearing what you do with the lycanthrope prompt.

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Rhymes With Camera's avatar

ALWAYS love revision! I don't mind generating new work but the real fun begins when you tinker!

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